Swimming Watching God
I laid in her bed,
My dark hair floating,
In her lovely green folds.
My eyes watching Her,
Like Janey said.
Looking in her light blue eyes,
I sigh and feel myself rise.
Her bed and her kiss are warm,
I am swimming in love.
Genevieve Hoskey
June, 2009
My dark hair floating,
In her lovely green folds.
My eyes watching Her,
Like Janey said.
Looking in her light blue eyes,
I sigh and feel myself rise.
Her bed and her kiss are warm,
I am swimming in love.
Genevieve Hoskey
June, 2009
I like it! Swimming in love is a very awesome description. It's the perfect length. Short and sweet. Very nicely done!
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Thank you so much for reading and for your positive comments, Ben!
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