A Horse Called Love
Love came to me one night,
So on his back, I took a ride.
Over fields of golden grain,
And through gardens in the rain.
We galloped quick through forest green,
And slowed our gait to watch the sea.
Forever earnest did I depend,
That this good ride should never end.
To freshest water I would lead,
Replenishing my valiant steed.
Offering him my finest sweet,
To save his ride for me.
Until one day he turned away,
My offer of a drink.
I led him there but he just stared,
His gaze away from me.
I reached for him to pull him in,
But he just hung his head.
And dragged his heavy hooves through mud,
Pulling all his dread.
His back no longer wanting me,
I walked beside awhile.
Traveling like strangers,
For many days and miles.
My legs grew tired and my mind numb,
From the worn out road.
I found some rest, food and drink,
And woke up feeling bold.
I tossed my head and felt the wind,
And faced into the sun.
My legs braced with newfound strength,
And I began to run.
I ran fast and hard all day,
And when the dusk was near.
I looked down at my legs and found,
All I’d ever need was here.
I found a little pond and gazed,
Into the water’s mirror.
At big brown eyes and shiny mane,
Was I seeing clear?
See I became my own that day,
A horse called Love I was.
Running steadfast in free reign,
My own benefit the cause.
I may find my way someday,
Back to two but first.
I shall run like no one can,
With un-abandoned burst.


I love poems that tell good stories. I like how yours started off with really excellent imagery and then transitioned into a cool pensive mood. And the ending about transformation was perfect. Very nicely done!
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